Saturday, 20 August 2011


It was an ordinary weekend at the Clemetis household 
 Viola was playing the piano while Gregory read
 Their youngest children, Josh & Josie, were playing peekaboo 
  Jasmine, one of their teen twins was on the phone to her latest boyfriend
While the other, Joanna, had slipped out the house, and was at the Bridgeport graveyard looking out over the city and thinking about the future
She was horrified to see a meteor strike her house

Immediately, she started running for home
Where the meteor had started several large fires
The rest of the family were trapped in the living room, panicking as the room burned around them
Joanna arrived home to find the place in flames
 But she was too late to save her family

 She was only in time to see the Grim Reaper arrive to collect their souls

No amount of pleading would sway him
 "Death must come to us all child, it was their time" 


  1. Aw... Poor Jo (can I call her Jo?).

    Good start though. Nice, concise, and straight to the point. :)

  2. Great tragic start to your new legacy!

  3. Well... damn. What a way to start your legacy. Poor Joanna.

  4. Yeah, Joanna's not having a very good start to her life I'm afraid

    @Giga - Feel free to call her Jo, might think about shortening her name to that for everyday use actually :)

  5. Whoah!
    Actually, that's not a bad way to start the next generation.

  6. Wow! That was quite a start!! Poor Jo! That's certainly one way to get things off the ground. =)

  7. I wanted to give her a family background, but also a reason why they weren't around and why she had no money

  8. 0_0

    Damn.........(excuse my language)

  9. Awwwww.... also how have I not read this before?

  10. I'm going to start reading your legacy. Looks like it might take a while though. :D I love the background you gave your founder. No one from no where is suddenly someone with a family and tragedy and all that good stuff.

  11. AH! I just started your legacy and I'm already heartbroken!

    This is a great way to start it. :D

  12. explosive start! ;)
    I am sure this is going to be a good read.